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Thighboots2 · 17th April 2008, 09:12

Hi Candyheels,

Well I would say the story is about wrapped up as it stands, although you do need to tie up the loose ends to let the reader know this story is finished. Skip to the end of the holiday having lived as a woman for so long, doesn't want to go back to being a man, discussion with mum, problems with being only 13, plans for the future. That wil end of Andrea's Beginnings properly.

Then if you are inspired, you can wind the timeline forward to the end of high school to cover the peiod between High School and College. Gives you scope for some flash-backs about how Andy/Andrea coped in the interveening period and plans for the future.

Then plan the 3rd story for post College and into a career. You need to really think out Andy/Andrea's life for the period you are going to write about.

Could be a good trilogy, if you keep your readers hooked. The plot will be essential, just wrap the aspects of being a woman in a mans body around it. There are lots of other examples on storysite, but not nearly so carefully written.

Do let us know if you get inspired and the story continues.

Simon

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Thighboots2 I'm a Silver Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: London (D) Cambridge (E&W/E) Age: 52 I am Male Posts: 537 Thanks: 78 Thanked 134 Times in 78 Posts My Mood: Rep Power: 11	Re: Andrea's Beginnings Hi Candyheels, Well I would say the story is about wrapped up as it stands, although you do need to tie up the loose ends to let the reader know this story is finished. Skip to the end of the holiday having lived as a woman for so long, doesn't want to go back to being a man, discussion with mum, problems with being only 13, plans for the future. That wil end of Andrea's Beginnings properly. Then if you are inspired, you can wind the timeline forward to the end of high school to cover the peiod between High School and College. Gives you scope for some flash-backs about how Andy/Andrea coped in the interveening period and plans for the future. Then plan the 3rd story for post College and into a career. You need to really think out Andy/Andrea's life for the period you are going to write about. Could be a good trilogy, if you keep your readers hooked. The plot will be essential, just wrap the aspects of being a woman in a mans body around it. There are lots of other examples on storysite, but not nearly so carefully written. Do let us know if you get inspired and the story continues. Simon __________________ *Are you confusing me with someone who gives a damn?*