I loved the story. I don't care if it was posted before, it stands for retelling...many times. The ifs put up by the readers are if onlys, and are forgotten.
A great story, and your shoes in the avatar are beautiful. I too think they could be those in your story.
I wondered if "mom" would come and take over where B/F left off, or what was going to come next. All ???????????s I just had to read on to answer my doubts.
Lets have more like it.
Muddypaws.
