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lorriette · 20th February 2008, 23:16

thanks Boot-lover & shyguy. I am trying to decide if i like it as is, or, to move on to the family reaction. Not being an author, to maintain the first person live speech may be too involved, and a change may spoil the flow.
As i have said in replies to comments about previous stories, i tend to think them up, then write them down in a very short space of time. This does lead to both spelling and gramatical mistakes, but most readers follow the plot, such as it is, and i don't need to interupt the flow.
Should i leave this story, as is, i will still post others, maybe even involving these characters.
Thanks to all who read the stories posted, I, and probably the other writers are happy to oblige. Please, please reply and give feedback, that way gets you the type of stories you want to read.

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lorriette I'm a Silver Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: monmouthshire uk Age: 55 I am Male Posts: 271 Thanks: 38 Thanked 37 Times in 21 Posts My Mood: Rep Power: 6	Re: first night thanks Boot-lover & shyguy. I am trying to decide if i like it as is, or, to move on to the family reaction. Not being an author, to maintain the first person live speech may be too involved, and a change may spoil the flow. As i have said in replies to comments about previous stories, i tend to think them up, then write them down in a very short space of time. This does lead to both spelling and gramatical mistakes, but most readers follow the plot, such as it is, and i don't need to interupt the flow. Should i leave this story, as is, i will still post others, maybe even involving these characters. Thanks to all who read the stories posted, I, and probably the other writers are happy to oblige. Please, please reply and give feedback, that way gets you the type of stories you want to read. __________________ feel the mood