WOW! Now that is a story! BRAVO!!!!!!! :D
I enjoyed reading that story immensely. You have a real way of putting the point-of-view directly on the character and it just kept me reading until the end (the heel theme never hurts, but hey........)
All in all...GREAT story!
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